Talk:Perfect Castaway/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk) 01:16, 21 January 2010 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * "is an episode" Which? First? Second?
 * Character name links?
 * "and the guys"...
 * Danny Smith is a dab link
 * "The four men set ashore on a desert island. Several months later," Seems to skip a bit of plot here? I admit I don't really know the episode, but surely something happened?
 * "free beer" Link is completely inappropriate...
 * "his friends" Who?
 * "Quahog" Link?
 * The "Brian is not sleeping with Lois" thing, which I seem to remember was pretty much the main joke in the episode, isn't really mentioned enough...
 * "Also Danny Smith and Wally Wingert." That is not a sentence.
 * "This episode was planned to be the season premiere but was changed out of respect for the victims of Hurricane Katrina and Hurricane Rita.[2]" Any more on this? What was the premiere? Where was this shown instead? Any quotes?
 * "motel, famous silhouette" fix?
 * "The Real World" italics?
 * "When Peter is building a time machine out of a Delorean he said, "I never knew everyone in 1955 was on fire".[2]" So what?
 * The cultural references section really needs fixing up...
 * "received positive reviews from Ryan J. Budke from TV Squad praised that the episode embraced its irreverance" Have you even read through this article?
 * "Critics of both Popmatters and IGN criticized the first few episodes but felt the show regained its humor after "Don't Make Me Over" which included this episode.[4][5]" What?

Response
Have done most thing that you requested, but quahog those not have a link. have not finished how those it look now. -- Saint Pedrolas J. Hohohohohoh merry christmas 18:21, 21 January 2010 (UTC)
 * There are now even fewer sources than there was when I reviewed the article, and it has wound up somewhat shorter- these are both things I specifically said needed improvement. You've also not addressed all the points- for instance, the caption issue. Again, I'm going to want to see some expansion and, preferably, some more sources cited before I'm happy to promote. J Milburn (talk) 23:58, 21 January 2010 (UTC)

Due to the lack of improvement and talk page communication, I am failing the article. J Milburn (talk) 01:20, 25 January 2010 (UTC)