Talk:Perfectionist (album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: WikiRedactor (talk · contribs) 14:57, 28 June 2014 (UTC)

Happy to take this review on, my full review will be here shortly! WikiRedactor (talk) 14:57, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
 * You're really nice. Thank you. —  prism    △  15:08, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
 * I was about to take this one before WikiRedactor did :P. Best of luck! Snuggums (talk • contributions) 15:19, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Thank you anyway! —  prism    △  16:01, 28 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Some disambiguation links to correct.
 * One external link to correct.
 * The DABs were corrected however I couldn't find any working archive link for HMV so I added a dead link tag. —  prism   △  16:01, 28 June 2014 (UTC)


 * Introduction
 * "In the United States, where it has sold 14,000 copies as of September 2013, it reached number 129; in the United Kingdom, it peaked at number 134." The U.S. chart position could be a bit more clearly worded. How about something like "In the United States, it reached number 129, and has sold 14,000 copies there as of September 2013; in the United Kingdom, it peaked at number 134."
 * Done


 * Composition
 * Unless I missed something in the review, reference #19 (Natalia Kills: 'Mirrors') doesn't mention a falsetto note.
 * Forgot to add the AllMusic ref. Done


 * Track listing
 * Can you note that the credits are adapted from the liner notes?
 * Done


 * Charts
 * The Canadian Billboard reference doesn't pull up a chart position in the country.
 * Changed to Jam! website


 * Neither does the German reference; Ultratop lists the German position though, so you can just replace that citation with a link to Ultratop.
 * Done


 * Release history
 * The Canadian HMV reference redirects back to their homepage.
 * I'm going to report a dead link on that one, since archive pages for it get an HTTP 302 issue.


 * The Brazlian Livaria Cultura reference doesn't seem to give a specific release date.
 * Removed


 * References
 * Can you organize the references with ?
 * Done


 * There is a parameter in reference #7 (Wommanequin – EP by Natalia Cappuccini) that has an unknown parameter.
 * Corrected

After these corrections are addressed, I'll check back in! WikiRedactor (talk) 15:27, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
 * , I think everything's done! :) —  prism   △  15:56, 28 June 2014 (UTC)
 * Happy to pass the article, nicely done! WikiRedactor (talk) 16:01, 28 June 2014 (UTC)