Talk:Pero Dile/GA3

GA Review
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Nominator: 01:11, 18 December 2023 (UTC)

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:43, 7 June 2024 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

Not sure if this should be showing as the third or second GA but nevertheless, I will crack on with this tonight! --K. Peake 06:43, 7 June 2024 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Move release to being the third sentence of the lead instead
 * "was handled by Sergio George while its arrangements" → "was handled by Sergio George, while the arrangement"
 * ""Pero Dile" is one of the album's salsa songs; it narrates" → "One of the album's salsa songs, it narrates" to be less wordy
 * Add a sentence after this mentioning what reviews said about the song
 * ""Pero Dile" was nominated in" → "The song was nominated in"
 * "where it spent 11 weeks" → "spending 11 weeks"

Background and composition

 * "the album's arrangements while" → "the album's arrangements, while"
 * "lover to "go ahead and tell everyone he" → "lover to proceed to "tell everyone he" to avoid overquoting
 * "maybe it was my mistake to love you so much" need not be in quotes; re-word to something like "admits that how much he loved her may have been a mistake"

Reception

 * "cited it as one of the songs from the album where" → "cited it as one of the songs where" since you already mentioned the album in this sentence
 * "dynamic singer" despite claiming the genre" → "dynamic singer", despite asserting the salsa genre"
 * "Parry Gettelman of the Orlando Sentinel praised" → "Parry Gettelman of the Orlando Sentinel praised" with the wikilink
 * Start a new para after the book review since that is all of the critic's reviews
 * "of Tropical/Salsa Hot Track of the Year but" → "of Tropical/Salsa Hot Track of the Year, but
 * "in the US, becoming his eighth number one" → "in the United States, becoming Manuelle's eighth number-one" for consistency with the lead
 * "was fourth best-performing" → "was the fourth best-performing"

Charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; glad I could pick this one up since it's half a year old! --K. Peake 18:31, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @Kyle Peake As always, thanks for the review. Pretty stuff, I'm pretty sure I got all the issues fixed. Erick (talk) 21:40, 9 June 2024 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I only copy edited a bit of prose and two minor links you missed; this will be signed off as the second review now! --K. Peake 07:19, 10 June 2024 (UTC)