Talk:Perry Hartnett/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

Comments
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:28, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * He lost his starting job in the 1983 training camp and was released, then signed again, appeared in two games as a backup, and was released again. I would split in to two sentences.
 * Ref spot check: #3, 6, 8, 16, 19, 22
 * Issue addressed - I also changed up this sentence if that's alright. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:34, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks good, passed. « Gonzo fan2007  (talk)  @ 21:39, 18 October 2023 (UTC)