Talk:Persecutory delusion/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pi.1415926535 (talk · contribs) 19:55, 25 July 2023 (UTC)

Close to GA quality; placing on hold to allow improvements. My main concerns about the article relate to Identifying reliable sources (medicine) (MEDRS). All cite numbers are from this revision.
 * Cite 1 isn't a MEDRS, and doesn't actually indicate that "persecution complex" is synonymous with "persecutory delusion".
 * the entry; couldn't find anything in Google Scholar.


 * Cites 9/17 are identical, and not MEDRS.
 * them and respective content for the 9th; couldn't find other source.


 * Cites 10 and 16 are marginal for MEDRS - replace them with journal articles or other MEDRS if possible.
 * Unfortunately I only found a partial alternative source for 10, it would only cover this part, People with this delusion often live a more inactive life. Should I cite, leave it as it is or remove the content?
 * I would leave the text as is, but add the additional cite.
 * ✅ Done


 * Cite 23 needs to be properly filled out with publisher/website (the name, not the partial url currently used), date, etc.
 * ✅ Done


 * remarkably higher is vague - either give numbers (e.g. 26% higher) or remove "remarkably"
 * changed "remarkably" to "significantly" (source wording), does that work?
 * Sounds good.


 * The first sentence under "Diagnosis" is a run-on sentence
 * ✅ Done


 * it's it is
 * ✅ Done


 * him or her them
 * ✅ Done


 * If possible, add a sentence or two discussing how prevalent the condition is (e.g. 1 in 10,000)
 * ✅ Done, added that 70% of first case psychosis are persecutory delusions.


 * In addition to those mentioned above, one other source (Freeman and Bebbington, currently #5) needs to be properly filled in/formated.
 * ✅ Done


 * Standardize date format in citations - the article currently mixes dmy and yyyy-mm-dd.
 * ✅ Done

Overall

 * 1) Well-written
 * 2) Verifiable with no original research
 * 3) Broad in its coverage
 * 4) Neutral
 * 5) Stable
 * 6) Illustrated

Good work. I made a few minor citation formatting copyedits, ready to pass now. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 20:58, 26 July 2023 (UTC)