Talk:Pershing Square Building/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:43, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

Comments The article is excellent and it's hard to find fault. It's certainly GA quality but could we just address these issues before I promote? Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 11:56, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
 * " Grand Union Hotel.[3] Construction..." just a solitary ref in the lead, probably could be removed as long as the material is noted and referenced in the main body.
 * Removed.
 * " in 2010. In 2016" vaguely clunky.
 * Fixed.
 * "the Dual Contracts was" were?
 * Fixed.
 * " cost $3.5 million, then a very high sum.[" consider inflation so we don't need "then a very high sum". And consider inflation on the other contemporaneous values.
 * Fixed.
 * "The 25-story building's site. and " rogue period.
 * Fixed.
 * " investor Henry Mandel[a] offered " awkward red link/note combo somewhat detracts from the fine prose.
 * Removed the red link. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "accepted.[23]<[24]" rogue <.
 * Fixed.
 * "Pershing Square Building Corp. " with or without period? Be consistent.
 * I went with spelling out the name fully. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Continental Can Building could be a reasonable redirect to create since you have it in bold.
 * Done.
 * "The current owner..." -> " the owner is..."
 * Done.
 * "110 East 42nd Street" has been linked a couple of times already before you get to the third link in the Description section.
 * I removed this duplicate link. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "peace.[47][35]" while you're editing, could you order these?
 * Done.
 * Could link Vanderbilt Avenue (in the caption).
 * Done.
 * " is a 24-story office " vs "who took up the 24th and 25th floors"?
 * Fixed. It is 25 stories but the 25th story is not a full-lot penthouse. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Check consistency in refs, e.g. ref 37 has a URL and a publication date but no accessdate, unlike the others.
 * I have fixed these. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the comments. I have fixed them all. epicgenius (talk) 15:37, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Good work, definitely happy with that so promoting. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 16:15, 1 April 2020 (UTC)