Talk:Persona 2: Innocent Sin/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:43, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

Will be happy to offer a review. JAG UAR   22:43, 8 November 2015 (UTC)

Disambiguations: none found

Linkrot: none found.

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * "The original version was not localized for western territories, but the PSP version was released" - however
 * "Persona 2: Innocent Sin is a role-playing game where the player takes control of a group of High School students" - should high school be capitalised here?
 * Personally I would rephrase "Innocent Sin began development after the release and success of Persona" to Development of Innocent Sin began after the release and success of Persona
 * "The original audio was lauded by Bartholow, saying the voice acting" - stating
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * References check out OK, reliable sources, no evidence of OR
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Neutral
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * Stable, no edit warring
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * No images used
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

This article meets the GA criteria and I couldn't find anything worthy of putting this on hold, so I'll pass it now. Well done! JAG UAR   11:19, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
 * Whoa, that was fast! Thank you for the review! (although I was not the one who wrote the article - that honor goes to ).--IDVtalk 11:24, 9 November 2015 (UTC)