Talk:Peru at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:12, 14 May 2018 (UTC)

Going to take up this review. MWright96 (talk) 07:12, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Background

 * "and with the exception of the 1952 Helsinki Games has participated" - a comma is needed between "Games" and "has"

Alpine skiing

 * "but she failed to finish" - completed to avoid reptition of closely spelt wording
 * "finishing the first run in a time of 59 seconds, but failing to finish the second run." - end again to avoid reptition

Cross-country skiing

 * "and moving from Peru to Seattle, Washington" - sentence needs a period to complete it
 * "he finished with a time of 45 minutes and 53 seconds, finishing in 94th place out of 95 competitors." - placing 94th