Talk:Peter Bynoe/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

--  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:12, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
 * The Personal Background setion begins "Born in Boston, Massachusetts,[5] Peter Bynoe came from a well-respected family." So I don't know what you want me to do as far as beginning with Bynoe.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 04:03, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
 * See, the article mentions "Peter Bynoe" in the second paragraph of the section when instead it should mention "Bynoe", since the first paragraph covers his full name. Hope that made sense. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 16:03, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I think I got it now.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 05:05, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Check. --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 19:29, 13 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Celtics is linked.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 04:03, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Fixed Mr. Bynoe, COMSAT and NBA.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 04:03, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you to TonyTheTiger for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 19:29, 13 September 2008 (UTC)