Talk:Peter Lombard II/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:14, 28 February 2018 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead and infobox

 * Lombard's birth date in the lede and infobox should be in the MM-DD-YYYY date format

Early life and education

 * "Dr. Peter Lombard II was born 24 May, 1976 in Guam." - Peter Lombard II was born in Guam on May 24, 1976.; also it's not the Wikipedia to have titles like Dr. in the article
 * Add the names of Lombard's parents which is in Ref 4
 * Wikilink St. John's School to St. John's School (Guam)
 * "Lombard attended the U.S. Naval Academy from 1995-98}} - 1995-98 should be 1995-1998 per MOS:DATERANGE
 * Link valedictorian and CoSIDA
 * "After, he studied at Johns Hopkins School of Medicine." - Afterward,

Pre-Olympics

 * "Winning qualified him for the UCI Oceania Mountain Bike Cross Country Championship" - Winning the race
 * "Lombard was the only Guamanian athlete to qualify for the 2016 Olympics on merit." - 2016 Summer Olympics
 * "He also took a week off of work" - better: He also took a week's absence from work

2016 Summer Olympics

 * "He crashed on the first and second lap." - laps

Post-Olympics

 * "After Rio, he discovered he had spine issues." - try After the Games, he discovered he had spine issues. to avoid using "Rio" too closely to the end of the previous sentence