Talk:Peter Taylor (footballer, born 1928)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:09, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:09, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * General
 * No copyvio/dablink/external link issues
 * There are a few duplicate links, but I think they should be retained as they are relevant in their respective places.


 * Playing career
 * It was at Middlesbrough that Taylor first met Brian Clough, who was then fourth-choice striker at Ayresome Park Maybe add a few words on what his relevance would be in Taylor's future (present as of now)?
 * OK, I had thought about it.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
 * You can put ref 7 at the end of the queue of all the lines it supports in para 2
 * OK.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
 * It proved to Storey's final season proved to "be"
 * Done.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Management career
 * In the Third Round of the FA Cup...knocked out by Manchester United. Looks unsourced
 * Sourced now.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Death
 * of pulmonary fibrosis I think it should come earlier in the sentence.
 * Yeah, have changed it around.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)


 * Statistics
 * What exactly is the source for Managerial statistics?
 * I found a source for it now.--EchetusXe 21:14, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks, this can be promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:07, 23 June 2016 (UTC)