Talk:Peter Vincenti/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 19:54, 31 August 2019 (UTC)

I'll take this one on, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 19:54, 31 August 2019 (UTC)

Initial review

Infobox

 * The note regarding his Aldershot stats doesn't appear to do anything. It needs to bring up the note when pressed, in the same way Nikola Žigić's note appears.

Lead

 * "Vincenti joined then League Two club Coventry City", I don't think we need then here.

Early career

 * "He was top goalscorer for Jersey in the Island Games, held in Rhodes in June 2007, Vincenti won Jersey Footballer of the Year in 2007." This sentence seems like a mix of two separate ones and doesn't really work.
 * Link League One in the final sentence, first mention outside the lead.

Style of play

 * "comfortable playing in central midfielder and as a forward" slightly off here, should be "in central midfield" or "as a central midfielder".