Talk:Peyk-i Şevket-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 23:07, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:07, 17 February 2015 (UTC)


 * No DABs, external links OK.
 * Image appropriately licensed.
 * Standardize on ftin conversions from meters, please.
 * I think the only one of these I saw was the draft figure in the box, which is now fixed.
 * I actually meant for you to add them for all of the conversions, but I went ahead and added them myself.
 * as a torpedo cruiser by the Ottoman Navy,[1] was also sometimes referred to as Missing conjunction, I think.
 * Good catch.
 * The ships were powered by a pair of vertical triple-expansion engines each driving a screw propeller. The ships' four Awkward, howzabout "their" for the beginning of the second sentence?
 * Works for me.
 * Watch your rounding; 450mm isn't 18 inches.
 * These dang conversion templates...
 * Link to definition of caliber.
 * It's already there.
 * Ooops, indeed it was!
 * Title case for Erickson, please.
 * Fixed.
 * 500th GA review! You should feel honored ;-)  Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:19, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I certainly do! I've got to catch up - only done 94... Parsecboy (talk) 12:53, 24 February 2015 (UTC)
 * You're practically a FNG! (swaggers into the saloon and puts a foot on the bar rail while ordering a double shot of sarsaparilla) (I wonder what it tastes like? Don't think I've ever actually had any.)--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 16:38, 24 February 2015 (UTC)