Talk:Phantoms (film)

Synopsis
The Synopsis is far too long. 82.26.108.163 (talk) 18:17, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
 * You're right. Let me see if I can implement a briefer form. Erik (talk &#124; contribs) 19:43, 13 April 2010 (UTC)
 * It's shortened. Erik (talk &#124; contribs) 19:54, 13 April 2010 (UTC)

Now the problem is that the synopsis is totally fucking incoherent. Good job. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 75.34.30.201 (talk) 19:47, 17 November 2010
 * Language please. But the problem obviously hasn't been fixed in seven years. The quality is poor and meaning ranges from the merely unclear to totally incomprehensible. The length, however, is fine. Not sure how that happened. It requires an extensive rewrite. I've placed the appropriate template. Canonblack (talk) 21:23, 20 October 2017 (UTC)

"Sierra-Nevada Mountains"
"Jenny Paige (Going) brings her sister Lisa (McGowan) to the resort town of Snowfield, Colorado, a small ski resort village nestled in the Sierra-Nevada Mountains where Jenny works as a doctor."

The Sierra-Nevada Mountains are not in Colorado. ---Dagme (talk) 15:31, 5 May 2014 (UTC)