Talk:Phenomenal Cat/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 12:48, 26 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Copyvio check - I reviewd the few non-zero matched found by Earwig's Copyvio Detector. No concerns. Similarly, no concerns regarding the offline sources I saw.
 * Media - no images, which is unsurprising. The use of the short audio sample appears to be justified.

Composition
 * "though the details of the revelation are not revealed" - would probably benefit from a bit of tweaking, e.g "... revealed to the listener" or "are not disclosed" ?
 * I went with your first suggestion.


 * the use of "professor", albeit in lower-case, would probably be OK in American English, but in British English it denotes a senior academic rank and, I think, might fall foul of MOS:CREDENTIAL. How about something like "scholar" or "academic" instead?
 * Changed to "academic".

Recording
 * Optionally, a bit of background could be provided. (From my own experience, it's a bit tricky trying to add something about the background for each song on an album without being very repetitive, but there may be some readers who would appreciate a bit more background here.)
 * Background for what in particular?
 * I was thinking of the sort of contextual detail found at Village Green (song), but the article can be a GA without such an addition. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:12, 27 October 2022 (UTC)


 * "distinct flute introduction" - is ths meant to be "distinctive"?
 * Fixed.

Release and reception
 * 'misspelled "Phenominal Cat"' - Rogan (2015) p.361 has "Pheonomical Cat", but doesn't specifically say that this was on the sleeve; please double-check Miller (2003)
 * In his 1998 book, Rogan writes it was misspelled as "Pheonominal" and, as you point out, "Pheonomical" in his 2015 book. Actually, both of those are misspellings of the actual misspelling. Miller is correct that the original album sleeve writes it as "Phenominal".
 * Excellent. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:12, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

Notes
 * No issues.

References
 * Hinman (1994) is OK per discussion at Talk:Four More Respected Gentlemen/GA1.
 * Looks like the Kitts book is probably from a small press, but looking at his profile page, also seems fine even if a case of WP:SPS
 * Yes, as you point out, Kitts has been published by a reputable publisher for other work and he is a real academic. Scholar Carey Fleiner also writes this in the further reading section of her 2017 book The Kinks: A Thoroughly English Phenomenon: "A collection of analytical and academic essays... [it] is a good read for fans who want some depth to their interpretation and understanding of the context behind the Kinks' work." (p. 204)


 * Other sources seem fine.
 * Spot check on Altham (1968) - OK.
 * Spot check on "thinks the song is a satire ... Maharishi Mahesh Yogi." - OK
 * Spot check on "thinks the song resembles a children's story or Victorian fairy tale" - OK

Infobox and lead
 * "their 1968 album, The Kinks Are the Village Green Preservation Society (1968)"- repetition of "1968"; optionally, add in "sixth studio album".
 * Fixed.


 * You could mention in the lead that Ray Davies produced the track too.
 * Done.


 * "It is one of several character studies on Village Green" - feels to me like it should also be in the body and sourced there, but I'm open to hearing counterarguments.
 * Not sure why it wasn't. I must have removed a sentence and not realized it. I've added it under the interpretation section.


 * "Commentators have likened the song to children's music or Victorian fairy tales and have sometimes described it as an example of psychedelia, though others dispute this." - I think this could be tidied up a bit. (e.g. not all commentators have "sometimes described it as"; also, re: "others dispute this" - I think only Miller is cited in opposition. (Again, feel free to defend the existing formulation.)
 * Yeah, it's really only Rogan that mentions children's music, but he and Miller both compare it to Victorian literature. I've changed it to this: Commentators have sometimes likened the song to Victorian fairy tales and have often described it as an example of psychedelia.

Thanks for another review.  Tkbrett  (✉) 23:53, 26 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your work on the article and the responses. I'm satisfied that the article meets the GA criteria, so am passing it. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:12, 27 October 2022 (UTC)