Talk:Phenomenal field theory

Technical vocabulary and clarity
This article is difficult to read because it is vocabulary is too technical and the meaning becomes obscured. To give the example of the opening definition:

All behavior is determined by the phenomenal field of the behaving organism.

Assumes a high level of familarity with the material, and does not really explain things unless the reader already has a good handle on the subject. Even rewriting to remove the technical vocabulary doesn't necessarily make things clear:

All behavior is determined by  motivation comes from the  phenomenal field  subjective reality of the  behaving organism  person.

It is still not clear what (if anything) is being said. While this may be a fascinating topic, it is a problem if the article is inacessable to the WP:READER. The piece could do with a rewrite from an expert in order to make the subject clear.

--Andrewaskew (talk) 03:42, 23 January 2013 (UTC)

Does this help?

A common expression which applies in this setting is that 'You cannot understand a person until you've walked a mile in their shoes', and seen the world through their eyes and mind. From this starting point, the professional psychologist sets out to understand the mechanisms used by each individual to develop the way in which he or she sees the world.

Oswegotownie (talk) 18:13, 29 September 2013 (UTC)

Misc
I have a copy of Snygg & Combs (1949) and the title is: "Individual Behavior ..." (note the spelling of behavior). Oswegotownie (talk) 20:11, 22 August 2014 (UTC)