Talk:Phenomenology (archaeology)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 January 2019 and 30 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): JamesZD online. Peer reviewers: Mayakrause7, Pedrososof.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 06:31, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer review comments
Mayakrause7 (talk) 01:12, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Some suggestions:
 * I think the opening needs to starts with a clear description of the subject - the lead needs to more explicitly introduce and explain the subject and its significance clearly and accurately, without going into excessive detail
 * The first paragraph especially needs to cut down on jargon and needs to be written much more clearly, without generalities
 * I think the article needs to be lengthened so that it is of an appropriate length; it is long enough to provide sufficient information, depth, and analysis on its subject, without including unnecessary detail or information
 * You need more detail so that the article acknowledges and explores all aspects of the subject; it covers every encyclopedic angle of the subject
 * You could add scholars who have attempted to incorporate a phenomenological approach in archaeology
 * I would include a reception section and include whether or not phenomenological pursuits in archaeology have been successful or not
 * Consider a brief description of a study that has utilized phenomenology in archaeology - examples may help explain in a clearer manner

Mayakrause7 (talk) 01:12, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Miguel I review this article on Thursday 18th at 8 pm, some suggestion
 * I think is a good start.
 * The article is relevant but need a little deeper in the topic of phenomenology and archaeology.
 * By the way, the article has something of information, could you add a little bit more about Merleau-Ponty’s Phenomenology of Perception.
 * could you add something from Thomas Csordas, he writes a little bit about perception and phenomenology.
 * Do you have a case studio that mix phenomenology and archeology (LASR, research), it could be greaat.
 * It is a great topic to explore the phenomenology with regards to archaeology issues. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pedrososof (talk • contribs) 14:09, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

New additions/revisions
Hello anyone who is interested. I have been working on some content for this page for my class and am getting ready to upload/update some things over the next few days. I hope people are pleased with the changes, but please don't hesitate to revoke, challenge, or change anything you'd like. I'm excited to see where this goes!

JamesZD online (talk) 04:06, 6 May 2022 (UTC)