Talk:Philippine investment climate

Neutral tone
The first section contains language that seems to draw already an analysis of different reports on investments, i.e., 'Philippines did not figure in the top 20', 'the investment climate of the Philippines is declining'. The article may be improved by re-writing the language such that it summarizes the contents on the report. Randytuano (talk) 01:53, 22 May 2011 (UTC)

Legal environment on Philippines
In discussing the legal environment on investments, it may be better to write this section in such as a way that the over-all legal environment is described, instead of focusing on specific laws. Randytuano (talk) 01:53, 22 May 2011 (UTC)

Re-writing the section on issues
Again the last section contains language that already analyzes the investment climate. It may be better just to list the factors that constrain/ impedes the investment climate from the sources that were cited. Randytuano (talk) 01:53, 22 May 2011 (UTC)