Talk:Phillip Davey/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 13:08, 4 July 2017 (UTC)

Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 13:08, 4 July 2017 (UTC)


 * Lead and infobox;
 * After being accidentally wounded, gassed and promoted to the rank of lance corporal, he was awarded the Military Medal in January 1918 for bravery in the field.; This entire sentence reads vague, it is something this he was promoted and awarded the medal for being wounded and gassed. Please rephrase
 * he single-handedly killed an eight-man German machine gun crew -> he killed an eight-man German machine gun crew alone; or something similar, I feel that "single-handedly killed" doesn't comply with the NPOV
 * Please consider splitting the lead into two for improving the flow and readability
 * Section 1; all good
 * Section 2;
 * 4:30 am; please add nbsp per MOS:TIME
 * in October he was gassed; gassed where? during which battle?
 * Section 3; all good
 * 65% confidence, violation possible. But I understand that this is due to the citation quote of the medal.


 * Very well written. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 10:23, 16 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks . I believe I have addressed all your comments. The earwig result is from the quotes. See what you think? Regards, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 10:43, 16 July 2017 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 14:09, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 14:09, 23 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 14:09, 23 July 2017 (UTC)