Talk:Phintella parva/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 12:55, 10 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Wolverine XI (talk · contribs) 10:20, 10 June 2024 (UTC)

I should finish the review today. Wolverine XI  ( talk to me ) 10:21, 10 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Retrospectively?
 * "and yellow" doesn't make much sense
 * What does this imply?
 * difference between this species and other members of the genus => feature of this species
 * Unlink species in Taxonomy
 * Latin for small? or the Latin word for small?
 * Unlink genus in Taxonomy
 * but was transferred to Phintella in 1983 => then later transferred to Phintella in 1983
 * Do you mean genus? Sentence is overall confusing
 * raised?
 * What?
 * absorbed?
 * Huh?
 * Very awkwardly phrased?
 * I suggest rephrasing.
 * grammatically incorrect

I'll stop here. What is apparent is that the article needs to be rewritten. The grammar and prose is particularly subpar. I suggest working on the article prose before renominating. Best, Wolverine XI   ( talk to me ) 13:10, 11 June 2024 (UTC)

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