Talk:Phoebe Caldwell

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Feedback on WGST 3991 proposal
This is a great topic for the assignment.

Something that will help bolster the case for notability is that Caldwell received an honorary doctor of science from the University of Bristol in 2011.

Her foundation website will not meet the criteria of being unbiased. You can certainly link to it in the External links section. It is also a good place to learn about Caldwell and start searching for other sources. For example, the Times article on winning the Times/Sternberg Award can be used to independently verify the award.

You can find more books and articles written by Caldwell by doing a search in Google Scholar. Some of the books have been reviewed in journals.

References

Estregger (talk) 22:17, 1 February 2018 (UTC)

Copyright issue
The person is notable. However, the details are copied from http://www.boomerangbooks.com.au/Using-Intensive-Interaction-and-Sensory-Integration/Phoebe-Caldwell/book_9781843106265.htm. Please immediately correct. '' ▒ Wirεłεşş ▒ Fidεłitұ ▒ Ćłâşş ▒ Θnε ▒ ―Œ  ♣Łεâvε Ξ мεşşâgε♣  07:29, 5 February 2010 (UTC)
 * The text originates from http://www.phoebecaldwell.co.uk, which has CC-BY-SA 3.0 and GFDL notice. Cassandra 73 (talk) 20:27, 3 March 2010 (UTC)

Peer Review
In the first part of the first section, it's a little unclear where it says "as she has major contributions beyond the age of 70"; I would elaborate about what she has contributed to.

Typo in first section, in the employment part it says "anSocial Services" not "Social Services".

The titles of her books 'Finding You Finding Me', 'From Isolation to Intimacy, and 'Using Intensive Interaction and Sensory Integration' should be italicized.

The sentence "The work consisted of men with autism" in the "Early Life" section is a little unclear.

In the "Intensive Interaction" section, is this: "Contrary to what is normally understood, children on the autistic spectrum do recognise when we use their own body language to communicate, provided we respond using the repertoire of their personal behaviours. We are shifting their attention from solitary self-stimulation to shared activity" in quotations because it's a direct quote from Phoebe Caldwell?

In the "Legitimacy" section there is a parenthesis between "recognized" and "by" that looks unintentional.

In the "Awards" section, in the sentence "Phoebe Caldwell was awarded this in 2009", it would clarify what you meant if you changed "this" to "The Times/Sterberg Active Life Award". — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jfirminger (talk • contribs) 17:29, 1 March 2018 (UTC)