Talk:Phyllis' Wedding/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 15:24, 22 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Image: This really isn't needed and doesn't have a good rationale
 * Yeah, I removed it earlier and another editor re-added it. I've removed it again, as I agree it doesn't add much to article.  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Intro: I would move the bit about the drums to the third paragraph and add a bit about guest stars to the first
 * ✅  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Synopsis: "Dwight doesn't…" -> "Dwight does not…"
 * ✅  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Synopsis: "his and Pam's song." Maybe add what that song is. I can't remember off the top of my head…
 * ✅ (It was You Were Meant for Me)  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Production: "his fifth such credit for the series" Is there a cite for this?
 * I added the four episodes he directed as citations.  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Production: "It features the first wedding from the series." I feel this is a tad clunky. Maybe "The episode is the first of the series to revolve around a wedding."
 * ✅  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Reception: graded the episode with an A -> graded the episode with an "A" Add quotes
 * ✅  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)


 * References: Ref. 5 and 11 have quote issues
 *  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)


 * Categories: Make sure they're in alphabetical order. Just a little nit picky. ;)
 * ✅  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)

That's all I could find. Good article! On hold.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   03:10, 24 September 2012 (UTC)
 * All should be fixed. Thanks for the review!  Ruby  2010/  2013  02:34, 25 September 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good! I will pass! :)-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   18:09, 25 September 2012 (UTC)