Talk:Piano Sonata No. 14 (Beethoven)/Archive 3

Moving forward
Following the recent victory for consistency, the time has come to consider whether the advantages this nomenclature should be limited merely to classical music. Some look at the title War and Peace and see a common name. I see a vulgar nickname for Война и миръ, and in a language the author would not have understood. What does it really tell the reader anyway? Here's what it doesn't tell him: The type of work, the author's name, and most importantly, the ordinal value of the work within the author's oeuvre. I submit that the reader would be far better served with a title along the lines of Novel No. 6 (Tolstoy). Kauffner (talk) 09:14, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * See WP:DEADHORSEDavidRF (talk) 10:40, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * The common name War and Peace describes the novel well and is close to the author's intentions. The name Moonlight Sonata (which is still there for those who can't let go) does not describe the music well and was coined after the author was dead. It is biased towards nature, lacks fantasy and has no relation to human emotions. Better a factual name than a misleading one. We are in the 21st century, let's move forward and not use the Romantic era glasses any more. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:27, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * To add to Gerda Arendt's point, nobody uses a numbering system for novels. Double sharp (talk) 12:37, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * WP:DEADHORSE applies to both sides of the issue. It was a long discussion which ended up going to ANI.DavidRF (talk) 12:42, 14 January 2012 (UTC)


 * WP:POINT. Stop it. Eusebeus (talk) 12:45, 14 January 2012 (UTC)

Template
I noticed that the template at the bottom of the article uses basically the same set of names that I was denounced for proposing. Someone needs to fix that. Kauffner (talk) 07:18, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * No one needs to "fix" it. The popular nicknames are included in parentheses after their proper titles. Redirects serve a similar purpose as has been pointed out here numerous times. Voceditenore (talk) 07:30, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I was talking about this proposal. I posted it back in November, but it was mentioned several times in the recent discussion on this page. Editors talk a lot about redirects, but these don't usually have much effect on traffic. They come into play only if a reader types in the name of the redirect letter-for-letter into Wiki's search engine. A recognizable title is what brings in the readers. Kauffner (talk) 08:05, 15 January 2012 (UTC)


 * The template titles are not supposed to show the article titles. They are free to show as much or little information as helps the reader of a page on which they appear to decide where he wants to go from there. The Beethoven piano sonatas template shows complete information with many helpful details (key, op #, nickname), which is great! The other extreme: Bach cantatas shows the number only, because there are about 200, look at any one of them (the latest BWV 97), you see what I mean, it's just "97" for "In allen meinen Taten, BWV 97". Gerda Arendt (talk)

RE: [Redirects] come into play only if a reader types in the name of the redirect letter-for-letter into Wiki's search engine.' This might have been true a few years ago. Try googling something like mooonlite sonnata. Nowadays, Google immediately shows results for "moonlight sonata", and the Wikipedia article (redirect) comes out top, immediately under the videos. To 'fool' Google, you need to make a semantically plausible typo like moonlite sonnateer MistyMorn (talk) 09:56, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * That's cause the article was moved very recently and Google hasn't fully adjusted. It doesn't normally work that way. Google and see what happens. Kauffner (talk) 11:12, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I wasn't going to post here, but was curious about this challenge. When I now google quasi una fantasia the top return is
 * Piano Sonata No. 14 (Beethoven) - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
 * en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moonlight_Sonata
 * 14 in C-sharp minor "Quasi una fantasia", Op. 27, No. 2, popularly known as the
 * Moonlight Sonata, is a piano sonata by Ludwig van Beethoven. Completed in ...
 * The second return is then
 * Piano Sonata No. 13 (Beethoven) - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
 * en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Piano_Sonata_No._13_(Beethoven)
 * Beethoven included the phrase "Quasi una fantasia" (Italian: Almost a fantasy) in the
 * title because the sonata does not follow the traditional sonata pattern where ...
 * Then it goes to YouTube performances. So I'm not understanding the problem. Milkunderwood (talk) 17:13, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Google isn't using the redirect that we spent so much time fussing over, that's all. It isn't really a problem. Someone was confused about redirects, so I tried to explain. In any case, I am now taking off my hat as chief redirect explainer. If anyone wants to understand this stuff, they can look it up for themselves. Kauffner (talk) 00:23, 16 January 2012 (UTC)


 * neew wold simphony, hamerklavier sonatta MistyMorn (talk) 11:35, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Those go to the article proper, no redirect is involved. The phrase "New World Symphony" is in that article's header, while "hammerklavier" in the opening. Of course, this article will continue to rank as long as the phrase "Moonlight Sonata" is kept in the opening, even if we keep piling on the judgmentalism. Kauffner (talk) 13:43, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Oh, please cut the sour grapes WP:POINT sections. You've never been on the losing side of a resolution before?  Grow up.DavidRF (talk) 14:21, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * And FWIW, what Google does is pretty irrelevant to what we do here anyway. ♫ Melodia Chaconne ♫ (talk) 14:56, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I had no idea. I guess that explains a lot. Kauffner (talk) 15:48, 15 January 2012 (UTC)

Poor spacing pokes out at the top
Any way of preventing " Quasi ...? I'm using Chrome for the Mac; is it a problem on other systems? One simple solution would be to italicise the double quotes too; is that done? Tony   (talk)  09:25, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Using Chrome on XP I don't see a problem - can you be more specific? Milkunderwood (talk) 19:15, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I've now moved the double quotes inside the italics - does this make the problem go away? Milkunderwood (talk) 19:23, 14 January 2012 (UTC)

Title page image
I've uploaded the title page from the first edition of the score to Commons. It's File:Beethoven Piano Sonata 14 - title page 1802.jpg. Best, Voceditenore (talk) 18:51, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Can this not be pasted into the article? I don't know the rules (much less how to do it). Milkunderwood (talk) 19:18, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * ✅ Image added. Double sharp (talk) 05:28, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * I had read here that it might be useful to have as an illustration, hence I uploaded it. But I figured those who were actively working on the article would have a better idea on where to place it. Best, Voceditenore (talk) 07:33, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Thank you, the dedicatee will be pleased as well, did you know? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:48, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Excellent illustration! MistyMorn (talk) 10:00, 15 January 2012 (UTC)

Tempo
I'd be interested to write a section regarding the tempo of the first movement, based off of Andras Schiff's lecture on it. If no one has any objections, that is. --Sauronjim (talk) 05:07, 29 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Sounds fine, provided everything is properly sourced. Ideally you would get multiple opinions, all coming from authorities. Opus33 (talk) 16:46, 29 November 2012 (UTC)
 * I agree that would be ideal, but I don't know of any other sources that could be used, other than perhaps citing actual performances by other masters. Apart from Google searching (which I've tried) I wouldn't even know where to look. I don't suppose you (as someone who seems to have a lot of experience with classical music articles) could point me in the right direction? --Sauronjim (talk) 12:46, 30 November 2012 (UTC)
 * Interpretive editions of the Beethoven sonatas usually specify recommended tempos, using a metronome mark. These could be compared with Schiff's preferred tempo. Two that are fairly well known are the Bülow-Lebert edition (published in the U.S. by Schirmer and used by generations of piano students) and Artur Schnabel's edition (which has authority because of Schnabel's great prestige as a performer of the sonatas).  I would tell you the tempos given in these editions except that I no longer own them.  They could probably be found in a music library. Opus33 (talk) 18:05, 30 November 2012 (UTC)

Spam?
The new section on an orchestral arrangement of the sonata looks like possible spam to me -- it's posted by an editor whose editor-name looks rather like that of the arranger. My inclination is to delete this section. Comments? Opus33 (talk) 15:52, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
 * That was my initial inclination as well. It may be worth researching to see if there is enough literature on other orchestral arrangements, though, to keep the section. For now, I'm at least going to remove the youtube links. Dohn joe (talk) 16:05, 9 May 2013 (UTC)
 * To be fair, the article on the arranger has been around awhile. But the links don't need to be there any more than links to any of the MANY other arrangements of the piece out there. ♫ Melodia Chaconne ♫ (talk) 18:18, 9 May 2013 (UTC)

Audio
It says that it's a MIDI recorded on a digital piano. When I thought I heard some mistakes, I checked the audio on Musopen and found nothing that said it was a MIDI. On the contrary, it seems to suggest that Paul Pitman was the one who played it. So unless anybody can find a reason not to, I'm removing that part about the MIDI. Light Peak (talk) 01:46, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

Influences
Apparently the 3rd movement of Shostakovich's sonata for piano and viola (op.147) is partly influenced by this Sonata by Beethoven. The Wikipedia article there: "The final movement of the sonata carries a substantial portion of the work’s emotional weight. Shostakovich gave the Adagio movement an unofficial subtitle: Adagio in the memory of a great composer or Adagio in the memory of Beethoven. The most explicit connection to Beethoven is Shostakovich's quotation of Beethoven’s ‘Moonlight’ Sonata in C-sharp Minor, op. 27, no. 2 (1801). Throughout the movement, glimpses of the Beethoven sonata appear (mostly as the famous rhythmic pattern of the ‘Moonlight’ sonata), juxtaposed with the reappearance of themes and motives presented earlier within the viola sonata." — Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.157.242.4 (talk) 11:48, 13 February 2015 (UTC)

Notation
Why does the new music notation look so garish compared to the examples I had made previously for the page? Older version of the page with mentioned music Craigsapp (talk) 01:19, 7 February 2014 (UTC) Compared to


 * I agree that yours looks nicer. It also matches the original edition (on IMSLP, linked from article) more closely in leaving out the numeral 3 over triplets.  Both figures err in rendering Beethoven's "sordino" as "sordini", which it would be nice to fix.  Opus33 (talk) 02:00, 8 February 2014 (UTC)
 * ✅ Now the LilyPond example in the article shows "sordino". Double sharp (talk) 14:16, 23 February 2014 (UTC)

I'm personally OK with the font (although the old one does look more elegant). What bothers me a lot more about the new notation example is the insufficient space between barlines and the notes immediately succeeding them. Double sharp (talk) 14:22, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
 * That's what you get from a free notation program. I think the repeated triplet numerals are rather unprofessional and distracting. The explicit sharp for the D# in the last bar should be provided as a courtesy. As for "sordini/sordino": I think published scores use the plural, "sordini". Why should we use "sordino"? -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 14:46, 23 February 2014 (UTC)


 * The urtext edition of the sonatas I own (Schirmer) gives "sordino". Editors (both of interpretive editions and of WP) do seem to have an urge to correct Beethoven's Italian here. I don't know for a fact whether Beethoven's Italian is ungrammatical; maybe a musically inclined native speaker could help? But in general terms I feel better if WP, which aspires to be a scholarly source, reproduces what the composer wrote as exactly as possible.


 * Re. the actual point at hand, I'd be happy to go back to the old figure; no one here seems to object. Opus33 (talk) 20:06, 23 February 2014 (UTC)
 * On further inspection, I now find "sordino" in the 1st edition (Cappi 1802), but its appearance makes it not really suitable as a score example here. Maybe the change by later editors to "sordini" deserves a footnote, although this discussion here could serve as such for the really interested reader. For the record, I agree that the version File:Beethoven piano sonata 14 mvmt 1 bar 1-4.svg should be restored. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 03:50, 24 February 2014 (UTC)
 * PS: The images File:Beethoven piano sonata 14 mvmt 2 bar 1-8.svg and File:Beethoven piano sonata 14 mvmt 3 bar 1-3.svg should also be restored. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 04:42, 24 February 2014 (UTC)

Hello. I'm the editor who created the versions of the incipits using the Score extension, and I wish that someone would have let me know before reverting all my work. That being said, there are two separate issues to address here. First, I have a couple points to make about the "sordino vs. sordini" debate:


 * I agree with User:Opus33 that we should try to reproduce what Beethoven wrote as exactly as we can. Naturally, the best way to do that would be to consult the autograph score (the version which survives in Beethoven's hand), but unfortunately, the first and last pages of the "Moonlight" autograph are missing. This means we have to consult secondary sources, i.e. printed editions.
 * The preface to my Henle urtext edition reads as follows: "In order to restore the original text of Beethoven's sonatas, free of all arbitrary editorial annotations and emendations, the authentic manuscript sources were consulted above all … There was further available for reference the original editions of the works, which—so far as Beethoven supervised them personally—can be viewed as a very important expression of his intentions." Thus, that editor (Bertha Antonia Wallner) follows the first edition which User:Michael Bednarek referenced above, and prints "sordino." This is likely the reasoning that the editor of Opus33's Schirmer edition followed as well.
 * Regarding whether "sordino" is grammatically correct, I'm no expert in the Italian language, but I am a seasoned musician and pianist, and I think that it could be read to refer to the damper pedal, rather than the dampers themselves, which would explain the use of the singular instead of the plural.

So, my position on the Italian issue is that no matter which method of rendering the score is used, it should follow the first edition and read "sordino." Which leads me into the hairier issue of which method to use to render it, the Score extension or an image file generated from a proprietary scorewriter.

Let me first offer a revised version of the incipit, correcting the other two oversights I made in creating it earlier: the missing explicit D sharp in the fourth measure, and the repeated tuplet numerals. I've also moved the first "3" to below the staff, inspired by my Henle edition, and set the dynamic marking to "whiteout" everything behind it so that it can still be read when it crosses the bar line.

I hope from this that you can see how powerful and flexible GNU LilyPond is when it comes to engraving. That being said, there are indeed a couple of technical problems with the Score extension—that is, the implementation of LilyPond currently available for MediaWiki—which are frustrating to me: the resolution is low, the output is in PNG format rather than SVG, and a number of complicated issues prevent me from changing the "global font size" or creating more horizontal space (not to mention the fact that it doesn't accept syntax from the latest versions of LilyPond).

As a compromise, then, I propose that I could upload SVGs generated using LilyPond (increase the zoom in your browser to see how it looks at size (edit: zooming in about 5 or 6 times in Firefox is ideal for me)), and include the source code used to generate them, as a stopgap until such time as the Score extension fixes these issues. I believe this to be an improvement over similar images generated using proprietary software (e.g. Finale or Sibelius) because it's free and open source, which means anyone can make improvements on it without having to spend any money. Skiasaurus (skē’ ə sôr’ əs) 20:43, 14 January 2015 (UTC)
 * I don't see any great difference between the image you suggest and the one currently in the article. Your ties are shallower (good), your stems on the eights are a bit shorter (not so good). On balance, I don't care if you upload that image to Commons and use it in this article, though the corresponding note about "sordino"/"sordini" will then need to be rewritten. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 07:52, 15 January 2015 (UTC)


 * The stems are sort of interesting -- somehow their "tilt" doesn't quite match the notes. Even so, I would be happy if you (Skiasaurus) went ahead and put the new image in.  It's much sharper under magnification than what we now have, and it properly reads "sordino".  Thanks for all the work you've put in on this problem.  Opus33 (talk) 16:17, 15 January 2015 (UTC)


 * "I wish that someone would have let me know before reverting all my work." That's funny, there were no musical examples before I put them there on 3 March 2012, so that should be my comment. Craigsapp (talk) 03:00, 16 May 2015 (UTC)

Mozart Influence
I vaguely recall a previous version of this article noting that the triplet pattern in the first movement seems to be inspired by some funeral music from a piece by Mozart, possibly one of his operas. And that Beethoven had copied said passage into his notes while composing this. I came back to this article just now to reference that fact, only to find that the relevant section seems to have been removed. I'm wondering if anyone knows the reason for this. Or perhaps I'm remembering incorrectly and previously found that part elsewhere, in which case I'm curious — should I find the source again, would it be worth adding to this page? --Sauronjim (talk) 09:22, 2 January 2016 (UTC)

Reception
The reception-related content (one paragraph afaics, sort of implying that the "influence" of this sonata died with Chopin) is pretty meagre for this sonata. A suggestion is offered at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Classical music (please comment there, not here). --Francis Schonken (talk) 14:26, 11 August 2017 (UTC)

Video interpretation - should it be included in the article
Hello,I've uploaded a great rendition of Moonlight Sonata on piano, by Ron Minis. However, he plays the song with delay and reverb effect pedals, creating synth-like noises along with the piano playing. Thus I wanted your advice before putting it in the article. Is it representative enough of this Beethoven song, or a too "experimental" interpretation ? Thanks. Skimel (talk) 09:43, 8 October 2017 (UTC)
 * I don't think Minis' fantasy on this fantasia would add anything to the article. -- Michael Bednarek (talk) 10:05, 8 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I came to this conclusion and you confirmed it. Skimel (talk) 18:53, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

Moving this page to Moonlight Sonata
Hello. Why is it not possible to move this page to the new article's name "Moonlight sonata"? Opo Chano (talk) 10:53, 7 February 2015 (UTC)


 * It was that name, translation of some critic's personal impression decades after the composer's death, - unrelated to Beethoven. We had long discussions to get it right again, please see the archive. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:01, 7 February 2015 (UTC)


 * It's a question of balancing the considerations at WP:AT. The previous discussion led to a consensus that consistency with Beethoven's other sonatas was important. Testing that consensus would require a new WP:Requested move. Dohn joe (talk) 14:52, 7 February 2015 (UTC)


 * The consistency was one argument, the other the fact (!) that Beethoven knew nothing of moonlight, and a critical edition would not even mention the term. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:36, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Well, the second point is simply not true. See Cambridge University Press critical study and Bärenreiter urtext edition, among others. Dohn joe (talk) 17:13, 7 February 2015 (UTC)


 * I wonder how you can say "not true" to a "should not" ;) - My Henle Urtext has no moonlight or Mondschein, Cambridge UP has it in quotation marks, possibly aware that it is not a really good name, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:08, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Well, you said "would not", which would take a "not true". If you meant "should not", I'll take it back. :) But in any event, most publishers use "Moonlight" to identify the work fairly prominently. You may have an older version of Henle - they use "Mondschein/Moonlight" currently. As does Wiener Urtext, and Peters, etc.... Dohn joe (talk) 18:55, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry about not typing what I meant to type ;) - Henle has "Piano Sonata no. 14 c sharp minor op. 27 no. 2 (Moonlight)", not the other way round, similar in the others. If this is going to be discussed again, I will hopefully resist the urge to participate, - the last discussion was not good for my health. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:49, 7 February 2015 (UTC)

Hello, if you will look at the Archive pages for this article, you will see a long, yucky, acrimonious discussion about this very topic. Please, let's not do it all over again. Opus33 (talk) 18:53, 7 February 2015 (UTC)

This is a year old, but my 1975 Henle is even stranger: it has Pathétique, Appassionata, and Hammerklavier, but not Mondschein! Double sharp (talk) 13:25, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
 * Not all that strange that Pathétique and Hammerklavier would be in there. They were either given to their respective pieces by Beethoven himself, or were given during Beethoven's lifetime and he approved of them. Appassionata and Mondschein both were used after Beethoven's death. --Sauronjim (talk) 20:46, 12 January 2018 (UTC)

Incipits
Since the incipits are once again being rendered using the Score extension, I have modified slightly the code that I wrote for them several years ago (to use newer LilyPond syntax and to shrink the staff size) and placed it into the article. My code is much easier to follow and edit than what was there. Edit: Additionally, the incipit for the first movement looks a lot better with all but the first of the tuplet numbers removed (and the remaining one placed below the staff), and the pedal directions correctly use Beethoven's "sordino" instead of the (possibly more grammatical but almost certainly differing from Beethoven's original; see previous discussion above) "sordini". Skiasaurus (/ˌskiːəˈsɔːrəs/) 00:24, 22 November 2018 (UTC); edited 00:32, 22 November 2018 (UTC)

Again, move this to "Moonlight Sonata"
WP CM guidelines clearly state that it is more useful to label works by their most well-known title. "Piano Sonata No. 14 (Beethoven)" does not fit this. 80.213.92.123 (talk) 00:04, 28 June 2020 (UTC)


 * As it is, entering "Moonlight Sonata" into the search box redirects to this page. Should we also re-title the pages for Beethoven's Opp. 13, 53, 57, 81a, and 106 Sonatas?  Keeping the naming convention uniform makes the best sense.MisterCSharp (talk) 15:09, 30 June 2020 (UTC)


 * Agree, see also the long discussion (archived) in 2012. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:42, 30 June 2020 (UTC)

Score excerpt from the second movement
In the fifth bar there's a g natural in the left hand, which should be a g flat. The midi file also has it wrong. Sorry, I don't know how to change it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2003:E6:7F04:B262:D0F8:DF79:DBCA:BFC2 (talk) 08:08, 10 January 2021 (UTC)