Talk:Pickle Rick/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:46, 12 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a short description and alt text to every image.
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "by Breaking Bad" "by the Breaking Bad" (both times)
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Beth's unhealthy relationship with Rick, and Beth and Rick's views" "Beth's unhealthy relationship with Rick and their views"
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a serial comma after "Danny Trejo (as Jaguar)".
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "It won" "It won Rick and Morty" - the Outstanding Animated Program award was given to the show for this episode.
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Plot is less than 400 words so that passes WP:TVPLOT.
 * Add a comma after "sets up a lab in the sewer".
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "group are" "group is" (American English)
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "" - WP:CITEBUNDLE please
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Check for ordering issues:
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 * "Afterwards" "Afterward" (American English)
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "a number of" is kinda wordy. I would suggest using "several" instead.
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "a breakfast cereal and in-game" "breakfast cereal, and in-game"
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Scheeden - typo.
 * Good spot, ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Russian mobsters" Russian mobsters",
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "relationship to" "relationship with"
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Add a serial comma after "8.7 out of 10 in IGN".
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Where do the quotes "emphasized the pickle-ness" and "too adorable" come from?
 * The (YouTube) video embedded in the given source ("Design Sneak Peek"). — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Vulture should link to Vulture (website) since it is the website version of a magazine.
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * The award table should be formatted for accessibility to screen readers. As a result, move the scope row to the "Award" category (see here).
 * Had a go—does it look right now? — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
 * ✅ — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
 * Is that true? I could be getting mixed up between sources, but I don't think I've ever hit a paywall or article limit on Vulture. — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * That's it. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:38, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * thanks for the review! Couple of questions/replies and the rest are done. — Bilorv ( talk ) 13:34, 12 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Great work; passing the article. Interesting article to expand and an interesting read overall. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:08, 13 July 2021 (UTC)