Talk:Pico Far East Holdings Limited

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(copied from user talk:Jim1138 Jim1138 (talk) 02:35, 18 April 2017 (UTC) wiki page: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pico_Far_East_Holdings_Limited

Issue:
 * 1) This article is an orphan, as no other articles link to it. Please introduce links to this page from related articles (Please indicate accurately). (July 2016)
 * 2) This article contains content that is written like an advertisement (Please indicate accurately). (April 2017)
 * 3) A major contributor to this article appears to have a close connection with its subject (major contributor since many changes by your side). (April 2017)
 * 4) This article needs additional citations for verification (Please indicate accurately). (April 2017)
 * 5) This article relies too much on references to primary sources(Which is Primary sources?). (April 2017)

Please share more on the how should we change the content since it is subjective. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 218.103.57.11


 * Issues:
 * The wp:cleanup tags should have instructions on what to do.
 * I moved the Subsidiaries and affiliates reference below the section title. Refs should not go into section titles.
 * Each award should have its own reference. Especially where one of the references has multiple refs which may not include all listed awards. I used wp:named references on Marketing Magazine's Marketing Events Awards 2016 in Singapore
 * Please use a more complete reference such as . Include url=, title=, publisher=, date=, accessdate=
 * The history section appears to contain marketing jargon. It should be written for the layman.
 * event marketing and brand activation company this needs to be rewritten for the layman. There is an article event management. Would linking to this be pertinent?
 * Jim1138 (talk) 03:59, 18 April 2017 (UTC)


 * I removed this information from the wp:lede. The lede should summarize the company, not discuss stock. Add it elsewhere: Pico has been listed on the Hong Kong Stock Exchange (sehk: 0752) since 1992, and their associate Pico (Thailand) Public Company Limited has been listed on Thailand’s MAI (SET: PICO) since 2004.

I read the instruction and your comments. And i revise the content already.
 * orphan problem cannot solve, since i cannot find any article to link with this article.
 * Section title issue solved
 * Awards reference already inserted
 * Complete reference is added if there is
 * History section has been revised


 * The problem with the awards is there are too many and the quality of the awards is suspect. Vanity award. Please read how wp:ping is used. You need to sign with four tildes "~" to make it work. Cheers Jim1138 (talk) 09:14, 10 October 2017 (UTC)