Talk:Pieces of a Woman/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:12, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:12, 17 May 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
 * ✅ Kingsif (talk) 03:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "Little Lamb" should go before "Bron Studios" per the billing block.
 * ✅ Kingsif (talk) 03:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "Proton Cinema" should also be added after "Bron Studios" per the billing block.
 * ✅ Kingsif (talk) 03:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after Jimmie Fails.
 * ✅ Kingsif (talk) 03:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "September 4, 2020" per WP:DATECOMMA.
 * ✅ Kingsif (talk) 03:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * That last paragraph feels like it could be expanded a bit.
 * Do you have suggestions? The critical section is already summary style, and the stand-out response is obviously Kirby's nominations for all major awards, so I don't see what to add without being too much. Kingsif (talk) 03:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I see that the critical response section mentioned criticism for the plot but overall gave praise to the acting, so I would mention that reviews were generally positive while also noting the criticism to fully summarize that section. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:03, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ Kingsif (talk) 15:15, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * The plot section is under 700 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * Per the American English template, change "centimetres" to "centimeters".
 * ✅ Kingsif (talk) 03:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)


 * That's about it with the plot. There's also no issues with #Cast.

Production

 * "as well as taking elements" sounds weird. reword
 * Changed to "incorporating fictionalized aspects of"; now reads It is based on their play, as well as incorporating fictionalized aspects of the trial of Hungarian midwife Ágnes Geréb. Kingsif (talk) 23:20, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I don't know. "as well as" still feels unnecessary. Maybe change that part to "while also". Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:24, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Why? Usually when people adapt works, they do it directly, so adding something else should stand apart. But I'll just stick "and" in. Kingsif (talk) 23:40, 20 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "Hungarian National Film Fund".
 * ✅, though I don't think that was necessary/improvement Kingsif (talk) 23:20, 20 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "which explore" "that explore"
 * ✅, as awkward-to-read as "that films that explore" is... Kingsif (talk) 23:20, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Maybe consider "noted that films exploring grief". Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:28, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Nice, done that. Kingsif (talk) 23:40, 20 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "ten minutes long".
 * ✅ Kingsif (talk) 23:20, 20 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "for example".
 * Changed to "like", which presumably resolves your issue Kingsif (talk) 23:20, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Just a question but are you adding comments before making your edits? 23:30, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Before hitting save, usually people aren't so quick. Kingsif (talk) 23:40, 20 May 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * "afterwards" "afterward" (American English)
 * ✅ Kingsif (talk) 23:21, 20 May 2021 (UTC)


 * "at Toronto" "at TIFF" (the event) or "in Toronto" (location)
 * ✅ Kingsif (talk) 23:21, 20 May 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * I recommend using the "cite RT" and "cite MC" templates for #Critical_response.
 * I recommend not doing that, since they have much less flexible params to cite web. Kingsif (talk) 23:23, 20 May 2021 (UTC)


 * The accolades table should be improved for accessibility "sort keys", captions, and "scope=row".
 * I can read up on that, but besides above-average rowspan crosses (and rowspan is accepted in awards tables, unlike filmographies), a screenreader should be able to parse it just fine. Kingsif (talk) 23:23, 20 May 2021 (UTC)


 * Also, do not use small font in the table per WP:SMALLFONT.
 * Tables aren't already small font, though? Kingsif (talk) 23:23, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
 * The part "(Also for The World to Come)" is unnecessarily small. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:26, 20 May 2021 (UTC)
 * Well, it will look just as awkward at full size until awards tables get a "notes" column, especially since accessibility doesn't like line breaks in tables. But we can live with it. Kingsif (talk) 23:41, 20 May 2021 (UTC)