Talk:Pied Cow Coffeehouse/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 07:03, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Will review this article. This'll prolly be my last review till sometime, as I'll be having a semester exam (I want to die). Will be back in some days after this review!  Gerald WL  07:03, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking time to review, and good luck with your exam! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:15, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , man, I didn't even remember the materials :( but thanks for the encouragement!  Gerald WL  14:37, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Lead

 * "The restaurant has an eclectic interior decor..." Maybe put quotations in "eclectic" to signify that it's a source stating this? Without quotations it will look like an opinion.
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:41, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * The logo is "The Pied Cow Coffeehouse," but this article is "Pied Cow Coffeehouse." Which is right?
 * Unless sources overwhelmingly use "The", I don't think "The" is needed per Naming conventions (definite or indefinite article at beginning of name). --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:41, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Description

 * "illuminated by heats lamps..." Heats is plural, so maybe is it "heat lamps"?
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:43, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "did not serve people under the age of 21." Should we link minimum age here, since it's related?
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:43, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * ""Anyone who grew up in Portland..." Link Portland, Oregon?
 * Nah, "Portland, Oregon" is linked in the lead, as well as the infobox, and "southeast Portland" is linked in the Description section. I think editors have an understanding of the restaurant's location by this point. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:43, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

History

 * "by the Portland Street Art Alliance..." Link street art in its respective word?
 * "Street artists" links to street art right after, so I don't think the duplication is needed. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:44, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Reception

 * ""pie shop/hookah bar/dispensary..." Link dispensary?
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:48, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "an opium den, a Casbah..." Link opium den and whatever a Casbah is?
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:48, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * "each on a scale of 5." Perhaps the better way to say is "on a scale of 1 to 5."  Gerald WL  14:52, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
 * I've used "on a scale of 1 to 5" in all my other Portland restaurant articles with Zagat reviews, but if you feel strongly I can change. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 23:48, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Note:, I will have to be inactive until 11 Dec Portland time due to (apocalypse-inducing) exams. Will look back here after it!  Gerald WL  14:56, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

Overall
(1 hour before exam starts), this article has passed the GA criteria.  Gerald WL  04:26, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , Thanks and good luck! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 04:30, 4 December 2020 (UTC)