Talk:Piedmont Macon North Hospital

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 May 2019 and 23 July 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): NVaden.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 19:17, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Strasburg7312 peer review
Overall I think you have a pretty good start! You give a good introduction that’s is clear and to the point that the reader can read more about in the following sections.

You have the information structured well, but I personally would change how the other headings are. For example, I would make the history heading the same as the title and the references. Then, when people go to access the article they see it easier. Another thing you could do is link Macon, Georgia to your page. That way they can be traced to one another. The last input I have would be to try and find a picture to add. When people look up the article on Wikipedia, it would be nice to see what you have looked up. Don’t forget to request permission unless you own the picture. The “Editing Wikipedia” reading we had has a couple pages that talk about that.

Other than that the content looks good so far and it seems to be neutral to me! The sources you have listed so far also seem to be good. They look credible and it doesn’t go back to a blog post or a news article. I didn’t see any grammatical mistakes at the moment but I would make sure to proofread once or twice. I always have to do it multiple times to be able to catch my mistakes some times. Strasburg7312 (talk) 11:44, 1 July 2019 (UTC)

Amber's peer review
I think you have a good grasp on what type of information should be included in an article about a hospital. It is a good idea to include the services that they offer as well as linking them to other articles that provide more information about that specific service as some individuals might not fully understand what they are.

For your lead section, I would consider rearranging the order of the sentences you have present on the page. I believe the second sentence gives your audience a better grasp of what the article is about as opposed to the facility’s address being listed first. I would even consider not including the address in the lead section at all. It could instead be included in an infobox off to the side of the page where you could also include other important information such as when it was founded, who it was founded by, the facility’s website, and even the photo you mentioned. Adding a feature like this will be beneficial as it presents the audience with important information that is easily scannable right when they enter the page.

I would also elaborate on the other hospitals that Coliseum Northside Hospital merged with in Macon. I was left with questions after reading that statement, but as your work progresses I am positive all these questions will be answered! Atallent (talk) 12:53, 1 July 2019 (UTC)