Talk:Pieter Jelles Troelstra/GA1

GA Review
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I am going to have to fail this article's GAN nomination, due to referencing concerns. Almost the entire article is unreferenced, which must be fixed before the article becomes a GA. Please also do a complete copyedit of the article, to avoid awkward phrases such as "he got into". There are numerous short paragraphs that should either be expanded (if possible, since this article is still fairly short) or combined with other paragraphs. This should be done with all one and two sentence paragraphs.

If you have any questions about this GA review, please contact me on my talk page. Dana boomer (talk) 18:47, 6 October 2008 (UTC)