Talk:Pieter Nuyts/GA1

GA Review
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Comments by Rubenescio
In want to address a few issues before I will review the article: Rubenescio (talk) 10:11, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Wasn't he also three times mayor of Hulster Ambacht?
 * Didn't Anna van Driel die while giving birth to their son Pieter?
 * Was he involved in the Siege of Hulst in 1645?
 * Where did he die and where is he buried?

Rubenescio (talk) 11:00, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
 * The words "imprisonment" and "house arrest" are used interchangeably, but they have a rather different connotation. Could this be clarified?
 * To address your points in order:
 * You're right - added that.
 * Yes, but the article already says she "died [...] giving birth". I think it is clear already, but adding "while" would be OK too.
 * Nope, he arrived shortly afterwards - text and reference added.
 * Can't be 100% sure where he died, although I assume it was in Hulst - however, no source I have actually says that outright. He was definitely buried there though - added info and reference.
 * Clarified.
 * I've also done a quick style edit. Appreciate all the hard work you have put in so far, and well done on finding that Australian map. Taffy (talk) 15:03, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

Review
Rubenescio (talk) 22:38, 8 May 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) Well-written: ✅
 * 2) Factually accurate and verifiable: ✅
 * 3) Broad in its coverage: ✅
 * 4) Neutral: ✅
 * 5) Stable: ✅
 * 6) Illustrated: ✅