Talk:Pikachu/to do


 * "Pikachu is most famous for being the "face" of the Pokémon franchise, perhaps being the most widely recognised around the world. " - needs reference
 * does not have enough footnoting, and could use with a few more references.
 * needs to have its grammar and spelling checked and corrected.
 * The cultural impact is in stub form.
 * WP:LEAD is pretty poor
 * lots of Weasel words (eg "probably, the most popular") a fair dose of repeating itself,
 * some needless references to the editor's other favourite Nintendo games.
 * The cultural impact section is still a bulleted list.
 * The biology section is written from an in-universe perspective
 * The "in the anime" section is headed up with a decorative image (can we replace it with a screenshot of Pikachu and Ash?)
 * Game names aren't always in italics.
 * In the anime section, paragraphs often start off talking about one thing and end talking about another.
 * There could be better linking- like in Biology, various electrical concepts aren't linked like they could be.
 * Some of the wordings bother me: "Pikachu is the only Pokémon in Ash's huge party that has been with him in every series, although a Phanpy he rose from an egg joined him after he travelled around Hoenn. "
 * " Many of the Pokémon animated shorts with all-Pokémon dialogue have featured Pikachu as the main character, often as the main voice of reason. "
 * some concepts are casually thrown in without explanation or linking (like a "Phanpy").
 * the order of the sections feel haphazard and mixed together. (Why is anime Pikachu's diet in that section? Why does a description of in-game pikachus separate the anime and manga sections? etc.)


 * All tasks completed &mdash; M  inun    (Spiderman)  15:26, 17 July 2006 (UTC)