Talk:Pilot-induced oscillation

Promotes the subject?
This article is tagged as promoting it's subject. I can't see that.

(also,it's strange that it accumulated 2 templates without having a talk page) Anniepoo (talk) 10:52, 20 July 2009 (UTC)

Expert needed
This article needs the attention of a skilled wordsmith who also has some expertise in the subject of PIO. At present, the article is an assembly of isolated paragraphs - there is no organisation to the presentation of information. It gives the impression of having been visited by a number of individual editors and each one has added his favorite bit of information on the subject. The article also contains numerous colloquial expressions:
 * As such it is a coupling of the frequency
 * In a controls sense 
 * The problem has been mitigated in some cases
 * cause the aircraft to climb, say, by applying up-elevator
 * A pilot aiming for a 500 foot per minute descent, for example, may find himself descending too rapidly
 * A natural reaction to this is to push the nose down harder than one pulled it up, but then the pilot ends up staring at the ground.

At present, the article looks too much like a guide-book. WP:NOT shows that WP is not a guide-book or a text book. Dolphin ( t ) 11:10, 24 July 2011 (UTC)

external links are dead
Both external links to NASA videos return a access denied error. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.90.172.151 (talk) 20:51, 22 August 2018 (UTC)

Dead link to Air Force white paper
The link in the References section titled "Air Force white paper which includes definitions and history of PIO problems" links to the URL https://research.maxwell.af.mil/papers/ay2004/afit/AFIT-GAE-ENY-04-M16.pdf, which returns a "site can't be reached" error. I have found the paper at another link https://citeseerx.ist.psu.edu/viewdoc/download?doi=10.1.1.669.9089&rep=rep1&type=pdf and propose to update to this publicly-available link.0dj0bz (talk) 01:23, 26 September 2020 (UTC)

I have removed this link as it was redundant from the References list. I have also updated the reference to a publicly-available site at the URL https://apps.dtic.mil/sti/pdfs/ADA424366.pdf. 0dj0bz (talk) 04:02, 26 September 2020 (UTC)

Content needs references
Many sections of this page contain statements that have no references. Many of these are from the Witte thesis, it seems. Some time needs to be invested in documenting these referenced items.0dj0bz (talk) 01:57, 26 September 2020 (UTC)