Talk:Pinewood Preparatory School

I tagged this as being like an advertisement for various reasons. First, instead of showing us that it is commited to the students' education, it tells us right from the beginning, using the word "we" is a very cheesy mission statement. This seems to be the work of someone who has an interest in bringing attention to the school. There are rather fishy statements such as "In order to enrich the communities we inhabit, our members strive to embrace challenges, cultivate global vision, seek knowledge, and love wisdom," and the article later has a list of colleges to which students gained acceptance. If the article was writted by a disinterested person, this would most likely not be included. There is subsequently a rather long exposition about the history of the school, which is also suspicious. More circumstantial evidence for this is that the infobox was made incorrectly, shoddy writing, formatting, and grammar, and an overly long introduction. This article violates NPOV by sounding like an advertisement. --Qmwne235 23:25, 7 November 2007 (UTC)