Talk:Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Men Tell No Tales/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:26, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this article per a nice request from the nominator, Chompy Ace. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 00:26, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Archive all archivable sources.
 * Current progress:

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 03:27, 28 December 2020 (UTC)


 * First sentence in the lead seems kinda long, so...
 * Add a period to finish the sentence right after "from a script by Jeff Nathanson".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 03:27, 28 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Merge "with Jerry Bruckheimer serving again as producer" to the sentence starting with "It is the sequel" so it reads "Produced by Jerry Bruckheimer, the film is the sequel..."
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 03:27, 28 December 2020 (UTC)
 * With this done, change "The film stars Johnny Depp" to "It stars Johnny Depp".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 03:27, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

Initial comments. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 01:17, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * Plot is 623 words, so it passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 22:06, 28 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "Royal Navy warship".
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 22:06, 28 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Add references after everyone's role.
 * ✅ in a MCU style (example: Avengers: Infinity War) Chompy Ace 22:06, 28 December 2020 (UTC)

Other

 * Couldn't find any major problems with production, release, reception, or future.
 * ✅ for all Chompy Ace 23:46, 30 December 2020 (UTC)


 * References 79, 86, 89, and 92 are all dead. Replace them.
 * ✅ refs 79, 89, and 92 are archived via WP:ARCHIVETODAY; ref 86 removed Chompy Ace 23:46, 30 December 2020 (UTC)


 * The image in #Marketing is kinda small and unnecessary, so I suggest removing it.
 * ✅ Chompy Ace 23:46, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Final notes. Ping me when you have added comments. Some Dude From North Carolina wanna talk? 23:07, 30 December 2020 (UTC)