Talk:Platform switching/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cwmhiraeth (talk · contribs) 09:45, 4 November 2012 (UTC)

I will undertake this review and will be starting in the next couple of days. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:45, 4 November 2012 (UTC)

First reading
The prose in general is of a high standard. Here are a few points I noticed: Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:24, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
 * "... is related to both the texture of the surfaces of the implant and abutment at and the morphology of the implant-abutment junction (IAJ)." - This sentence is awkward and needs rephrasing.
 * "... that makes a difference. Difference in bone levels ..." - It is best not to finish one sentence and start the next with the same word.
 * "... a miminum biologic width.[6] Biologic width is the minimum thickness..." - It is best not to finish one sentence and start the next with the same word pair.
 * "... by platform switching implants that are 3mm apart or less or within 1.5mm of the facial aspect of a thin buccal plate ..." - This sentence is awkward and needs rephrasing.
 * - Please define or link the terms "crestal bone" and "buccal plate".
 * A number of paragraphs have no references at the end.
 * The references are consistent with each other in style and that is good. However they do not conform with the MOS guidelines for medicine-related articles. It would be useful to have hyperlinks where available (doi, PubMed etc), all the authors rather than et al. and the full name of the publication.
 * Thanks -- I'll get to all of these in 3 days time.  DRosenbach  ( Talk 18:04, 11 November 2012 (UTC)

Lead
The lead section of this article requires expansion so that it adequately summarises the rest of the content. I have put this review on hold for one week. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:44, 18 November 2012 (UTC)

Final assessment
No improvements have been made to this article since the beginning of this review three weeks ago. I consider the good article criteria are not met with regard to certain prose issues, the referencing and the lead section as mentioned above. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:57, 25 November 2012 (UTC)