Talk:Play (Jennifer Lopez song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomica (talk · contribs) 20:05, 15 April 2013 (UTC)


 * There is one disambiguation link (Robin Williams) fix it. — Tomíca (T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Unlinked Ar  re  22:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Infobox
 * I notice that electropop is present in the infobox, but it's not in the prose?
 * I've removed it. Ar  re  22:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * I have done some copy-editing. — Tomíca (T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Link critics — Tomíca (T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Why don't change United States to US Billboard Hot 100? — Tomíca (T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Add some information for the live performances.— Tomíca (T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Done Ar  re  22:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Background and release
 * This section lacks information to be honest. You mention that was released, but how? Radio, digitally, physically? Where in which territory? And as I can see there is no a release history table, make one. — Tomíca (T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 * I'll do that when I'm on next in a few hours. Thankyou for starting the review. :) Ar  re  22:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Composition and critical reception
 * BAG & Arnthor, why is Bag with capital letters? — Tomíca (T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 * A writer from Telegram & Gazette called the track "Madonna-esque". "called" is not the most appropriate word, try changing it. — Tomíca (T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Sal Cinquemani of Slant Magazine commented that "so many of the tracks" on the album J.Lo ---> remove J.Lo — Tomíca (T2ME) 19:18, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
 * done Ar  re  22:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi Tomica. Will you be finishing this review? Btw, a release history table has been added. And the first section is simply titled "Background" now. Ar  re  14:02, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
 * I will soon, I am busy in real life. :S — Tomíca (T2ME) 16:58, 5 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Ok Arre, sorry again that I delayed the passing of the article. I fixed the other issues and now I will pass it ;) ! — Tomíca (T2ME) 13:11, 15 May 2013 (UTC)
 * Thankyou so much Tomica :) no worries! Ar  re  13:17, 15 May 2013 (UTC)