Talk:Playboy Enterprises, Inc. v. Starware Publishing Corp.

Feedback/Suggestions
The article looks great overall. The facts and court decision sections are thorough and have good content. A few fairly minor suggestions, because nothing major seems to be missing or unclear:


 * The formatting towards the end of the Court Decision section might benefit from some reformatting to fit with Wikipedia style; for example, using 1) and 2) in the paragraph, and using a double-hyphen, seem to be discouraged on Wikipedia.
 * The "External Links" section is empty, and the "See Also" section could probably do with some additions.
 * Instead of including a section on U.S.C. Section 106 stating the statute in its entirety and then relating it to the case, perhaps it would be more concise and straightforward to link to the statute and only specifically mention the parts of it that are relevant to the case. That way more focus could be placed on how the statute applies to the case itself.

Other than that, I just went through and made a few minor changes in sentence structure or fixed small errors; some of them are listed below, feel free to revert any of them back to the original version:
 * "The photos submitted by Playboy Enterprises were strikingly similar, if not virtually identical to the ones found..." --> struck "if not virtually identical"; or perhaps removing "strikingly similar" and keeping "virtually identical" would be a better representation of the facts
 * Changed "all accused images" to "all infringing images"
 * Rearranged Starware distributed and sold, in the United States, approximately 9,611 copies of a CD-ROM entitled 'Private Pictures I'" by moving "in the United States" to the end.
 * Removed "that they argued were" from "shared the original photographs that they argued were in question."

Good work! I hope this helps. VM 12:19, 18 December 2011 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Psykonautiks (talk • contribs)

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