Talk:Playmate to Jesus/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:39, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

Comments A few issues, so I'll put it on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:55, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "The song, which was released" followed by "The song was released" is repetitive.
 * ✅ Is "Published" better? Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "it only managed to chart" it only charted in...
 * ✅ Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "and was only certified in that country" I imagine that to be obvious since it only charted in Denmark.
 * I've removed it, so Done. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "Danmark" Denmark.
 * ✅ Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Could link YouTube.
 * ✅ Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * " a radio single[2] on 12 September,[3]" might as well place the two refs together after the punctuation.
 * ✅ Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "The track was written as the first track" not great, rephrase to avoid repetition of "the ... track".
 * ✅ Reworded, should look better known, though I really don't know what is wrong with repeating "the". Editor E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Infobox should say Producer(s).
 * I'm confused here. How do you make it say producer(s), cause I've been looking all over the template page and can't find how to do it. Do you know? I don't think this should even be a problem. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "pop song[2]" similarly, place this after punctuation, it won't harm the reader to have to wait a few words for the ref.
 * ✅ Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "an E Major key" major.
 * ✅ Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "Lene's vocal" surnames please.
 * ✅ She has been under her stage name "Lene" for some of her solo release, so I don't see why this is a problem. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "Rene Dif's bridge is cut from the 3.5 single edit of the song" ditto, and what's a 3.5 single edit?
 * ✅ changed Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "The song has been certified gold" by whom?
 * ✅ by the IFPI Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Time Magazine is actually Time.
 * ✅ changed it. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't think the link you use for Idolater is what you're after.
 * What are you trying to say? Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Oh, wait. I had it disambung it. ✅ Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 17:22, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
 * ""How R U Doin?".[15]" no need for the spare full stop.
 * ✅ I think i fixed it
 * Denmark again.
 * ✅ fixed it. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * "Aqua members as they appear in the video." no need for full stop, not a complete sentence.
 * ✅ changed Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Chart positions table is pointless being sortable.
 * ✅ fixed it Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Sales/shipment but the article says it was 300k streams which is very different.
 * ✅ Changed to "sales of 300,000 units"
 * "Accessed from... " or "Retrieved..."? Be consistent in the refs.
 * ✅ Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Is it Allmusic or Allmusic? Be consistent.
 * ✅ I've added Rovi Corporation as publisher to make it clear. Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Ref 10 has no accessdate. Check others.
 * ✅ added accessdates Editor  E  at ma talk page up, scotty! 14:56, 5 August 2013 (UTC)