Talk:Pokémon Ruby and Sapphire/GA1

GA Review
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This is the page I will use to review this article so please watch it. Gears of War 2 23:57, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
 * OK, thank you for taking the time to review this article, and I have this page watchlisted. Artichoker [ talk ]  00:56, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments on Lead
 * The first sentence of the second paragraph needs a couple of cites.
 * I don't think this needs a citation per WP:Lead section.
 * The third sentence of the second sentence needs a cite.✅


 * I suggest that the lead be re-organized in the following way: Paragraph 1 deals with names, release dates, who made it (development), etc. Paragraph 2 deals with Gameplay. Paragraph 3 deals with Critical Reception and sales✅
 * "selling millions of copies to become the best-selling games ever for the Game Boy Advance" needs a cite.
 * According to WP's MoS, if the statement is already cited in the article (which it is), it doesn't need to be cited in the lead section. The Transmogrifier (talk) 03:33, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments on the Setting and Plot section
 * The third sentence of the first paragraph needs a cite.✅
 * "-this is done by raising Poke'mon, defeating the Eight Gym Leaders for Gym Badges, and eventually challenging the Elite Four and the champion" that statement needs a cite.✅

Comments on the Gameplay section
 * The first sentence of the second paragraph needs a cite.
 * This is already cited by the reference at the end of the paragraph.

Comments on the New Features section
 * Try to clarify the caption of the image. It's a bit confusing.✅

Comments on the Connectivity with other devices section
 * The second sentence of the first paragraph needs a cite.✅
 * The second sentence of the second paragraph needs a cite.✅

Comments on the Development section
 * The first sentence of the second paragraph needs a cite.
 * This is already cited by the reference at the end of the paragraph.
 * The third sentence of the thrid paragraph needs a cite.
 * This is already cited by the reference at the end of the paragraph.
 * The first and second sentences of the third paragraph needs cites.
 * This is already cited by the reference at the end of the paragraph.
 * The first and second sentences of the last paragraph needs cites.
 * This is already cited by the reference at the end of the paragraph.

One these problems have been attended to tell me. Thanks and cheers. Gears of War 2 02:39, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I have fixed a few problems, and I shall fix the rest in the morning. Artichoker [ talk ]  03:01, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Good. I look forward to premoting the article. I will not be able to premote it until about 2:00-300pm per church in the morning. Gears of War 2 03:03, 3 August 2008 (UTC)
 * I have addressed all of the concerns. Artichoker [ talk ]  14:23, 3 August 2008 (UTC)