Talk:Polartec Big Air at Fenway

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Speed.z. Peer reviewers: Heytherefriend, Tatumhartwig.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:28, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Review
Looking good! I did some copyediting and might have left a few templates. I removed the section on Polartec, which should be linked to. Next steps could include an:


 * infobox
 * a more encyclopedic tone
 * categories
 * maybe a photo of the event
 * and making sure it's not a Orphan. -Reagle (talk) 21:05, 25 February 2016 (UTC)

Polartec Big Air at Fenway Review
Hey! Great job on your Wiki article! Here are a few of the edits that I made...

· Inserted in-source Wiki links to...
 * – Sage Kotsenburg's Wikipedia page
 * – Joss Christensen's Wikipedia page
 * – Bobby Brown's Wikipedia page
 * – Gus Kenworthy's Wikipedia page

· Replaced original wording of "The construction of the massive structure..." to...
 * "The construction of the 140 foot structure..."

· Added an in-source Wiki link to the Boston Wiki page

·Added an in-source Wiki link to the Big Air (sports) page

Heytherefriend (talk) 18:30, 3 March 2016 (UTC)

Review
This is looking good so far!

I've just added a Wiki-link to Sam Kennedy's Wikipedia page.

My main recommendation as of now is to have a Lead Section. Perhaps move your first background paragraph to the Lead Section.

Tatumhartwig (talk) 12:40, 4 March 2016 (UTC)