Talk:Polly Roy

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There is a lot of great information in secondary sources about Polly so you should have no trouble writing a great article!S L Seston (talk) 20:25, 6 May 2015 (UTC)

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I was reading your article thought think your article is very informative. I also think that the research that Polly Roy has done with the bluetounge virus is very interesting. Did she make any special contributions during her research of the virus? Perhaps the addition of a picture of the virus to your article would be very nice. What do you think?? I went to the Wikimedia Commons and found a picture of the bluetounge virus: Nice job so far!! =] AZWOLINS (talk) 01:21, 11 May 2015 (UTC)

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AZWOLINS - very nice of you to find the picture for Bioraina! That would make a nice contribution to the article. Bioraina, I think you need to make the language in your article more formal. To do this, you should use fewer pronouns (replace "she" with Dr. Polly Roy or Dr. Roy) and focus on her professional work and career title at each university. You also MUST expand and explain her contributions to the research on bluetongue virus. Can you also find out exactly where she received her Ph.D. degree?? You mention her moving from one university to the next, but you should really include where she received her degree and what she did at each university. S L Seston (talk) 19:09, 12 May 2015 (UTC)