Talk:Pompey stone/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:19, 1 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * "New York circa" comma after NY.
 * Added


 * "moved to Albany" link.
 * added


 * "William M. Beauchamp did some" who was he? And can we find a better word than "did"?
 * "conducted"? descriptor added


 * "on display as a hoax" as an example of a hoax perhaps?
 * sure


 * "1520"[4]" need a full stop.
 * yup


 * "the 1911 capitol fire" I know it's a red link but shouldn't that be Capitol?
 * sure


 * "Intrigued by the stone, Cleveland brought the stone" brought it.
 * done


 * "blacksmith's" why apostrophe?
 * I can't type all the time, cut


 * "In 1841 Barber and... " avoid single-sentence paras.
 * combined with the para below


 * "In the 1860s...' same.
 * ditto


 * " ... of the European in North America." quote needs inline ref immediately.
 * sure


 * 'in 1894[18] upon' odd place for the ref, end of clause/sentence is fine.
 * OK


 * References are normally listed in alphabetical order.
 * done

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:15, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks,, are my responses satisfactory? Eddie891 Talk Work 13:40, 3 September 2021 (UTC)