Talk:Pooh's Heffalump Halloween Movie

Poor Quality
The text in the plot section of this article is really badly written. I've seen this movie, but I can't understand a word of the writing on this page. I'm gonna start editing, but help would be nice! --37.61.110.210 (talk) 08:20, 17 December 2012 (UTC)

Grammar issues and readability
To echo the comments of the IP user above, when I arrived at this article, I too noticed that most of the plot summary was gibberish. To that end, I've attempted to fix it.

To 173.161.142.201: I must continue reverting your edits until the stuff you submit makes sense and finally fits in with Wikipedia's standards for quality. This, for example, doesn't make sense: "for the very first time in the hundred acre wood Until Tigger, warns his friends about the Dreaded Evil Gobloon" nor does this: "By The Characters If He Catches Them First But Tigger tells them that if the Gobloon is captured first, before it catches them first The Gobloon will grant its captors one wish". There are capitalization mistakes, grammatical mistakes, etc.

We also don't need the "meanwhiles" you've added. And the problem with "Dreaded Evil Gobloon" vs "Dreaded Gobloon" is that the only place "Dreaded Evil Gobloon" is found on the internet, is on the article page. Not even certain "Dreaded" is part of its name. Cyphoidbomb (talk) 20:24, 14 January 2013 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 18 June 2015
Please add

Also, please add a See also section and include the following:

Thanks, Eric a.k.a.:

71.20.250.51 (talk) 02:55, 18 June 2015 (UTC)

✅ - Arjayay (talk) 20:52, 18 June 2015 (UTC)