Talk:Popcorn/GA1

GA Review
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This article does not meet the good article criteria and has therefore failed its nomination. Issues include:


 * Insufficient references
 * "An equally ingenious popcorn making" paragraph
 * "Producers and sellers of popcorn" paragraph
 * "Popcorn will pop when freshly harvested" paragraph
 * "Two explanations exist for kernels" paragraph
 * "Air-popped popcorn is naturally high in fiber," paragraph
 * "Popcorn, threaded onto a string," paragraph
 * Several "citation needed" tags
 * References must be formatted per WP:CITE/ES to include publisher and access date
 * Lead must be expanded per WP:LEAD to at least two or more paragraphs

Once these issues have been resolved, feel free to renominate the article. Thanks! Gary King ( talk ) 18:10, 3 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Expanded lead, done. Rnickel (talk) 00:35, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
 * "Popcorn, threaded onto a string", done. Rnickel (talk) 00:35, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
 * "Air-popped popcorn is naturally high in fiber", done. Rnickel (talk) 00:47, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
 * "An equally ingenious popcorn making", done. Blorblowthno (talk) 19:12, 6 February 2009 (UTC)
 * "An equally ingenious popcorn making", done. Blorblowthno (talk) 19:12, 6 February 2009 (UTC)