Talk:Porcelain Black/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jennie--x (talk · contribs) 11:50, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

Initial Comments

 * Lead
 * The claim that Black gained a "cult following" needs to be sourced as it could be challenged.
 * "Musically, she fuses industrial themes with pop music conventions such as electronic synths and a heavy reliance upon hooks. The combination polarizing opinions, she is best known for her guttural vocals and two-toned hair." This doesn't make sense fully - what combination is polarizing opinion? Pop/industrial music or guttural vocals/two-toned hair -- could this be arranged more clearly? Furthermore, are there sources that prove something is polarizing?
 * ✅ I decided to remove both concerns, as they seem to violate WP:BLP. Originally, I believed the sources under "Public Image" supported the polarization of opinion, but that might be original research. "Cult following" was OR obtained from source 5 which mentions the Myspace fandom.--Thevampireashlee (talk) 02:04, 29 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Life and career


 * Artistry
 * Minor grammar note: The sentence "Often, comparisons are drawn between her and Lady Gaga[23][24][25] But, she has also been compared to...", the "But" should be lower case and there should be a comma after Lady Gaga.
 * ✅ Got it. Fixed the pesky coordinating conjunction. --Thevampireashlee (talk) 02:04, 29 August 2012 (UTC)


 * Personal life


 * Discography, filmography and tours


 * References