Talk:Portrait of Giovanni di Nicolao Arnolfini

Sentence structure:
"Thus, the work is van Eyck's second portrait of Giovanni di Nicolao Arnolfini, a wealthy merchant from Lucca, a city in Tuscany in central Italy, who spent most of his life in Flanders." The sentence is too long. The subordinate clauses can be made into desperate ones.HillmanHan (talk) 00:32, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

Source citing
There is a lack of citation in this article. About the true identity of the man, the Arnolfini's relation/friendship with Jan Van Eyck, the description of the painting can all be cited to academic sources.HillmanHan (talk) 00:33, 4 October 2017 (UTC)