Talk:Portrait of Madame Cézanne (Lichtenstein)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 05:28, 21 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Lead it too short. Needs to be expanded.
 * fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:31, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * "The drawings fascinated Lichtenstein, if for no other reason than the attraction of outlining a Cézanne when the artist himself had noted that the outline escaped him. To make a diagram by isolating the woman out of the context of the painting seemed to Lichtenstein to be such an oversimplification of a complex issue as to be ironical in itself."[5] This was a statement on Loran's oversimplifying paradox of representing Cézanne's work with nothing more than black lines. --> You can't just have a quote and then state who said it in a another sentence.
 * These are two different sources. I have added the editor of the first, which is an exact quotation, to the text.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:38, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Detail --> Description
 * fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 14:31, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
 * No further issues.


 * Great. All issues resolved. Passing the article!  Statυs (talk) 16:57, 21 June 2012 (UTC)