Talk:Potential Tropical Cyclone Ten/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:27, 19 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "with following number" - reword
 * ✅. This was a typo. I fixed up the sentence.  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 19:48, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "east cost" = typo?
 * ❌. Doesn't appear to be a typo to me, as it doesn't refer to a specific designated location (such as the East Coast of the United States). "East" is used as an adjective here, not part of a name.  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 19:48, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * They are saying you wrote cost instead of coast. Noah Talk 21:54, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Oops. I just realized that. Now ✅.  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 22:01, 22 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "cental pressure" - typo?
 * ✅. Yeah. This was a stupid typo.  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 19:48, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "or rain" - typo?
 * ✅. Yet another typo on my end.  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 19:48, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "floodwaters that were waist-deep" "waist-deep floodwaters"
 * ✅.  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 19:48, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "Longbreach area" - typo?
 * ✅. Yeah. This should've been "Longbeach".  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 19:48, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * "in Estero and in Bonita Springs" "in Estero and Bonita Springs"
 * ✅.  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 19:48, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * That's it. Great work!
 * Images are free-to-use.
 * Sources are reliable.
 * Every paragraph is sourced.
 * The article is broad in coverage.
 * No Copyvio / plagiarism.
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 19:36, 21 July 2021 (UTC)


 * All done. With the exception of one suggested change, as the spelling was intentional (it was not describing an actual name).  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 19:48, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Fixed that one now.  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 22:01, 22 July 2021 (UTC)

Drive-by source review from Destroyeraa
GENERAL: For NHC sources, the |work= parameter should be replaced with |publisher=. Also, linking the National Hurricane Center every time isn't necessary (optional). Destroyer (Alternate account) 21:54, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅. That was how I had found the sources from the articles I had copied them from, but I made the changes anyway. I deleted "United States Government" from each of those sources and replaced them with "National Hurricane Center" as the publisher. I also took out the work parameters from those citations.  Light and Dark2000  🌀 (talk) 22:39, 22 July 2021 (UTC)