Talk:Potion (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cherrell410 (talk · contribs) 15:27, 29 June 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 28.6%, but it's quotations
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Leaving my suggestions for improvement below:
 * Lead: link disc jockey as most people won't know what that is
 * Lead: penned --> written
 * Background and composition: The disc jockey --> Harris
 * Background and composition: penned --> written (unnecessary synonym)
 * Background and composition: quotations around steamy hook from Lipa, a nimble verse from Thug, a snaking bassline, as it is being taken from the pitchfork website
 * Background and composition: quotations around seductive chorus. I don't know where thats being taken from, but thats an opinion. if it's not being taken from anywhere, remove it or reword it.
 * Music video: recruited --> something more encyclopedic
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Leaving my suggestions for improvement below:
 * Lead: link disc jockey as most people won't know what that is
 * Lead: penned --> written
 * Background and composition: The disc jockey --> Harris
 * Background and composition: penned --> written (unnecessary synonym)
 * Background and composition: quotations around steamy hook from Lipa, a nimble verse from Thug, a snaking bassline, as it is being taken from the pitchfork website
 * Background and composition: quotations around seductive chorus. I don't know where thats being taken from, but thats an opinion. if it's not being taken from anywhere, remove it or reword it.
 * Music video: recruited --> something more encyclopedic
 * Leaving my suggestions for improvement below:
 * Lead: link disc jockey as most people won't know what that is
 * Lead: penned --> written
 * Background and composition: The disc jockey --> Harris
 * Background and composition: penned --> written (unnecessary synonym)
 * Background and composition: quotations around steamy hook from Lipa, a nimble verse from Thug, a snaking bassline, as it is being taken from the pitchfork website
 * Background and composition: quotations around seductive chorus. I don't know where thats being taken from, but thats an opinion. if it's not being taken from anywhere, remove it or reword it.
 * Music video: recruited --> something more encyclopedic
 * Music video: recruited --> something more encyclopedic
 * Heyy hope you're well and thanks for another review. Everything is done. Cheers. Iaof2017 (talk) 11:49, 4 July 2023 (UTC)