Talk:Potteries derby/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 08:11, 19 February 2024 (UTC)

I will review this.  The C of E God Save the King!  ( talk ) 08:11, 19 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay, real life stuff getting in the way, I'll try to get it done on the weekend.  The C of E God Save the King!  ( talk ) 09:13, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
 * No rush. EchetusXe 16:53, 26 February 2024 (UTC)


 * What's the need for the mention of Crewe in the opening paragraph?
 * Removed.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * "said to have been formed in 1876", Said by whom?
 * By themselves, have amended.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * "Vale were complete unknowns", why?
 * They were a minor team that hadn't received any coverage before that.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * More detail needed about that court case
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * "annual Stoke v Vale", vs
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Why were Vale forced to reapply?
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * It needs to be clarified that the Britannia Stadium and Bet365 Stadium are the same
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * "trashed the away end at Vale Park", formalise the language
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * "Dave Brammer also turned out for Crewe Alexandra after being controversially sold to Crewe", 1, WP:OLINK for Crewe already being linked earlier. And 2, why was it controversial?
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Why are we mentioning the rivalry with Crewe in the players for both clubs section?
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * No need to highlight in purple if you're removing the Crewe reference above
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * WP:OLINK on John Rudge
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Source 2, publisher title shouldn't be italicised as its not a print source and shouldn't be a bare web address
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Same as above for all non-print sources
 * Think I've done that.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Source 36, publisher title needs spacing
 * Same for 105
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Source 107 needs an access date.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Source 111, needs a proper title and has a bare address as a publisher
 * Done.--EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)

It looks in pretty good shape. Just need those issues pointed out fixed, then please ping me and I'll have another look.  The C of E God Save the King!  ( talk ) 07:33, 27 February 2024 (UTC)

-Thanks, I've looked at those. --EchetusXe 00:28, 28 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Then I am happy to say you have a new GA. Well done !  The C of E God Save the King!  ( talk ) 19:27, 28 February 2024 (UTC)